FL,The Return - And so it continues Ch.11! Updated 4/19/05

Tue Mar 01, 2005 3:49 pm by Wilde

good work, finally an end to all the cliff hangers!!

Edited by - Wilde on 3/1/2005 3:49:41 PM

Tue Mar 01, 2005 7:59 pm by Beta-5

mouth why Open drool all over! keybord is. sh..t.ng..o.t.ca.'t.t..pe.an..,ore

What that says mouth open... drool all over key bord is shorting out cant type any more...

I tyeped the fixed version with ou the short wit
my 90 keybored sofar in this story

i drool every sentence

Tue Mar 01, 2005 8:33 pm by dragonborn

uhhh, bret just so you know the dates backwards in the title, it should be 3/1/05 not 1/3/05.

Wed Mar 02, 2005 3:37 am by bret bretonian

Thats how we do it where i am, but i have changed it

Wed Mar 02, 2005 5:47 am by dragonborn

ahhh ok, didn't know that, just confusing for some of us americans.really good chapter BTW.

Fri Mar 25, 2005 6:19 pm by Beta-5

Come on finish da story!!!! please

Tue Mar 29, 2005 4:47 pm by Steel_Fang

great job, bret. Inspiring!

Edited by - Steel_Fang on 3/29/2005 5:48:58 PM

Wed Mar 30, 2005 3:17 am by Cerberus-ProjectValhalla

*Points shotgun at brets head*
Get writing. NOW!

Only joking take your time. Just dont take too much time on GTA.

Edited by - Cerberus-ProjectValhalla on 3/30/2005 4:17:27 AM

Wed Mar 30, 2005 8:13 am by Dextervt

Hey bret bretonian....
i haven't been around this topic and the forums for a long time....
and still your fanfics are perfect... nice to see this

....
wel see ya

Don'T hAte tHe plaYEr,
Hate The gAmE...
I haTe The deSigNer...

Wed Mar 30, 2005 8:46 am by bret bretonian

Whoa, long time Dex, you get back here right now!

Wed Mar 30, 2005 10:15 am by Dextervt

is it a bird........... no
is it a plane......... no
it's dexter who's back in the game my friend

...
and the story is perfect i have to say it again

... so keep wrighting

Don'T hAte tHe plaYEr,
Hate The gAmE...
I haTe The deSigNer...

Sat Apr 09, 2005 6:10 pm by Beta-5

Where are you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 I am in so much suspense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please come back and finish this bret. PLease

Sun Apr 10, 2005 2:34 am by Dextervt

yeah were still waiting

Mon Apr 11, 2005 12:29 am by fanficfan

Come on Bret. The only reason I keep coming back to this forum is to check up on "The Return." Please end this torture.

fanficfan

I want Freelancer 2!

Mon Apr 11, 2005 7:26 am by bret bretonian

Do not worry, all, Bret's fanfics don't die. he just takes breaks from them. This is already as long in terms of A4 Word pages as the last one and is taking longer.

Thank you all for the great comments, it will get finished.

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